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Old 01-06-2018, 04:10 PM   #1
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Old 02-06-2018, 10:16 PM   #2
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I would suggest you to develop more the main melody, because in my opinion is more like a simple EDM pluck splashed into an ambient track. It starts good, but then it reveals to be a bit uninspired. You need a clear idea, at least for a track, then you're free to change style on every track... but single ones have to be clear. This is just my thought
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I would suggest you to develop more the main melody, because in my opinion is more like a simple EDM pluck splashed into an ambient track. It starts good, but then it reveals to be a bit uninspired. You need a clear idea, at least for a track, then you're free to change style on every track... but single ones have to be clear. This is just my thought

Thanks for your thoughts, though I can't say I agree with you.


But then again, I experience music a bit differently than many others because of some synesthesia. For me, I feel that too direct of a melody would move it from impressionism to realism, and that's not what I was feeling for this track.
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Thanks for your thoughts, though I can't say I agree with you.


But then again, I experience music a bit differently than many others because of some synesthesia. For me, I feel that too direct of a melody would move it from impressionism to realism, and that's not what I was feeling for this track.
I understand, I didn't expect to let you change your own ideas. Everyone has to think on its own.
Not everyone can appreciate music distant from predictable schemes, so if I can't feel your track's mood many others will because we experience music with different brains and consequently different reactions.
Ok, I'm going OP, I stop there
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I understand, I didn't expect to let you change your own ideas. Everyone has to think on its own.
Not everyone can appreciate music distant from predictable schemes, so if I can't feel your track's mood many others will because we experience music with different brains and consequently different reactions.
Ok, I'm going OP, I stop there



It's good to see how other people receive things though. Thanks for listening and for sharing your thoughts

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Old 17-06-2018, 05:48 PM   #6
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Re: [ Ambient ] Endless Plane - Cumulus

Hmm if you don't want too direct of a melody you could check out (from my lack of Ambient music knowledge) Rameses B. His song Moonlight has a bunch of different instruments and special effects playing different melodies so there's not really one melody to follow, but the more you listen to it, the more you can grasp and it starts to makes sense as a whole. Especially the chorus, where the lead synth is really drowned out and a melody isn't obvious if you don't pay attention to it.

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