(Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood
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Old 23-05-2018, 08:52 AM   #1
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(Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

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Would like some feedback on general vibe (I was aiming for a cyril hahn/hnny type sound) and mix balance - it sounds a bit dull, but its not mastered yet! (there is no outro yet either!)

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New Update 30/07/2018 - I think this is now finished would love some advice on labels to send it to - I have no idea who may be appropriate.

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Old 23-05-2018, 09:10 AM   #2
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

Nice ambience at the start, it as a nice balance of high and low frequency. Very calming, intelligent sounding. The vocal has really nice processing. I think the beat could be varied a little bit more than it is, but just a bit. I wish I had more to say but this is really pleasant, just brighten the mix a little and your good to go.
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Old 23-05-2018, 09:12 AM   #3
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

Thanks so much for the listen and feedback I really do appreciate it and totally agree with the beat - that was my next plan of action :-)

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Old 23-05-2018, 08:01 PM   #4
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

Long time no see, welcome back back.

Needs less A-Ha title, other than that no complaints.

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Old 31-05-2018, 08:05 AM   #5
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

ha ha yes the title is a bit ah ha - was that 'take on me' though?

I'll try and get summat in for the comp, thanks for the heads up!

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Old 01-06-2018, 03:22 PM   #6
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

I really love the intro instead of it just being four to the floor build up. Very pretty! I really like your use of toms. I'm not listening on mastering headphones, but from my earpods the birdlike sounds feel a tad sharp.

This is a cool track, message me when you get the mix/mastering to your liking. Would be curious to rehear it then.

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Old 01-06-2018, 05:16 PM   #7
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

I think some really soft rides that you can barely just here coming in and out could give some portions a tad more energy. That being said, I really like the minimal nature of the track. Would be great sunrise set material.

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Old 04-06-2018, 02:30 PM   #8
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

Thanks for the advice and feedback - I like the idea of subtle rides too I'll give that a go! And yes I the bird sample is far too loud I've already amended that

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Old 15-06-2018, 09:25 AM   #9
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

New update - finally got around to finishing it...I think - let me know what you think.

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Old 21-06-2018, 08:54 PM   #10
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

Hi!
- I kinda don't like this background noise - it doesn't make anything to this track in the beginning, since it's not lo-fi but deep.
- I would start this track from 0.41, intro is a bit too long maybe?
- very nice and calm vocal sample - I like it.
- beat is really very deep - nice. i find this track very relaxing!
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Old 24-06-2018, 05:23 AM   #11
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

First let me say you did a good job on capturing the chill and groovy vibe. I feel like the breakdown needs more but everything I would suggest would add more energy and take away from how chill it is. Post break down I the synth that was used in the break slowly fades up seems a little predictable at the rate you sweep it back up, what if you swept the filter up once or twice up a little at unpredictable intervals just give a little mystery to the listener.
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Old 26-06-2018, 08:29 AM   #12
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

Thats some really great feedback people - much appreciated - I've not had much time to look at this track lately but when I do I will defo take your suggestions on board and hopefully get it done soon!

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Old 30-07-2018, 09:07 AM   #13
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- update.

Please could I have some label suggestions - i have no idea with deeper stuff?

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Old 31-07-2018, 12:49 AM   #14
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

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Love the changes. sounds pretty much done to me. might have just the headphones I was using but the vocal and lead pluck synth that plays through most of the song had some harsh frequencies while listening at a loud volume. Might want check the mix on several sound systems to check for ear pain.

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Old 31-07-2018, 03:03 PM   #15
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Re: (Very Deep House) Thin King - hold on me ft. Leo Wood

Thanks for the listen and feedback - randomly I had my earbuds in this morning and thought the same! I'll get back on it and tweak those sounds. Thanks again.

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Love the changes. sounds pretty much done to me. might have just the headphones I was using but the vocal and lead pluck synth that plays through most of the song had some harsh frequencies while listening at a loud volume. Might want check the mix on several sound systems to check for ear pain.

Sorry, no label advice.
Tried to tame those highs - what do you reckon?

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