[Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon
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Old 05-10-2017, 11:51 AM   #1
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[Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon

Hey guys

i've made a little tune and would like to know what you think about it . I appreciate any kind of suggestions critics etc.

hope you like it !

enjoy




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Old 05-10-2017, 02:03 PM   #2
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Re: [Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon

I really like this, the ambience reminds of Boards of Canada which is great.
The Intro seems a bit slow but that's just probably me. I really like this style of music.

The echo clapping seems a bit overused but there is enough expansiveness throughout so it doesn't really bother me. I like it. : )

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Old 05-10-2017, 10:51 PM   #3
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Re: [Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon

You've mixed alot of genres here, mate. I would extract the basis of this track and stick to 1/2 genres. In other words, I'd redone it.
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Old 07-10-2017, 11:33 AM   #4
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Re: [Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon

Good track, after the first minute it's beatiful. Beginning is too long and could be considered boring, also the end is too short, so you need a bit of reorganization, at that point the track will be more focused.
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Re: [Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon

A really noticeably prolonged introduction. But then the track begins to be interesting enough to forget about it!
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Old 08-10-2017, 04:47 PM   #6
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Re: [Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon

I cannot decide what you tried to do with the percs.
Some moments sound as it were trap beat, but as said by another commenter, you seem to have mixed a lot of genres.

I recognized as well the reference to Boards of Canada in these background pads and nice chords; though the melody is a bit too much volume for me. Maybe a question of mastering, but I can't say more since I lack experience.

This being said, I appreciated the track until the end, and the end is clean as well.
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Re: [Electronic] Qatarsis - Chordon

Good track overall.

I have some doubts about the kick, doesn't seem like the perfect fit (specifically the low end of it).
I like the mix of genres, especially more at the end when you get those trap-like hats.

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