Typing as I listen...that kick/snare bit in the begining is really really loud and cutting. Maybe the drums together need some compression, or just some DB adjustments relative to each other. Not sure. The lazy synth pad that comes in is great. The use of the vague vocals is nice but the synths get repetitive after the first minute or so. the higher reverbed arp is also a tiny bit too forward in the mix to me, for example around 2:50ish. The squelchy acid sound coming in at 3:00 is really a highlight, I would maybe shorten the track up in the beginning and get to that part sooner. My 2c. Hope it gives you something to think about.