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Old 14-06-2018, 03:29 PM   #1
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[Electronic] starphase - Vapor Thirst

My first time sharing music here in the listening booth. I'm still rusty when it comes to mixing and mastering, so constructive criticism is welcome.

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Old 19-06-2018, 06:05 AM   #2
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Re: [Electronic] starphase - Vapor Thirst

I really like main synth (on the highest octave) and drums, but all other sounds (chords, rhythmic synths) are quite dry, they lack of fullness. I've noticed at 2:40 you started using some stereo imaging/volume/I don't know what automations on the lead, it's like if it disappears and then returns, here you should use a filter, otherwise doing that at the end of the track to fade out.
If this is one of your first tracks, you've done a great work, you have a lot of time to develop your skills.

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Old 21-06-2018, 08:42 PM   #3
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Welcome! It's always this first time! What daw do you use for producing? Ableton has a lot of presets helping with mixing and mastering (I am also a beginner so I am using them).
I think generally you could vary this bassline (since it's tap,tap, tap all the time). Generally I like the atmosphere, the chords you use, and it is well arranged.
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Re: [Electronic] starphase - Vapor Thirst

Love the mood and melody, sounds like it could fit a dystopian film/game, like this (can't post links since I'm new but I'm talking about Shadowrun Dragonfall's theme song)

I agree with PPNDP though, the bassline gets a bit stale and needs some variation, I do notice the change to the notes at 1:50. You could maybe play around with using a different instrument for that bassline during that breakdown, and bring it back up when the drums come in at 2:30.

Or maybe use some sort of automation..but the idea is to have a break from the constant bassline. But that's me, I like Chillstep and changing the mood of the song throughout

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