For me personally the track starts from 1.33ish onwards get rid of the first half.
Kick could do with more weight, to lite for my break taste but it does fit the track.
Otherwies not a bad effort.
Not diggin it personally as not something I would listen to, however, I get it.
Theres some nice timbres and musical parts in it.
I think its my old adage, "is it dance or soundtrack?"
PS Are hotdogs made from cows?!!!