The riff is pretty damn catchy, but the volume, man! Crank it to 11! (Or maybe don't do that, we don't want to blow any speakers, but increase the volume)
The drums sound pretty nice, but just like mentioned before, that snare is kinda bad.
The mix fells kinda thin, you could propably add a rhythm guitar to it.
...And a bass, do it have a bass? I didn't hear any bass.
But yeah, it is a successful experiment, just keep working like that, and adding more stuff to it and you're good to go!