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Old 25-03-2018, 04:46 PM   #1
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[Techno] LWJ - Three Kit



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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

When I saw "Techno" in the title, I was expecing something a little more "banging", but this is rather mellow and still cool.

It's clear you've put a lot of time into setting things up in the mix, but still, it sounds a little of "the same" after the first minute or two. While it's really strong on the FX and staging, it's lacking a little in diversity. I know, it's a techno track and techno usually only needs a continuous beat to keep you moving, but given this is so mellow and the amount of work you've already put into it, it would really bring this up to a whole different level if you just added in something more to the music itself..

None of the above is meant to be critical in any way..just my own subjective gut feelings having listened to this track..more a case of what I would do or how I would move on from here if it were mine..so please feel free to disagree.

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Old 25-03-2018, 06:21 PM   #3
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

Hey AM,

Thanks for checking!
Actually I didn't put in a lot of time. It's more of extended jam session, all in all about 4 hours so far. That maybe explains why it's a bit flat and long? I haven't really played with any of the automation yet, most of the sounds are synths so there's plenty of potential for that still. But I was getting to the point where I just had to render it out and play it a few times to know what I'm doing

Yeah I don't know if techno is even a good name for this, but it was the closest decriptor I could think of.
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Old 25-03-2018, 06:32 PM   #4
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

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Hey AM,

Thanks for checking!
Actually I didn't put in a lot of time. It's more of extended jam session, all in all about 4 hours so far. That maybe explains why it's a bit flat and long? I haven't really played with any of the automation yet, most of the sounds are synths so there's plenty of potential for that still. But I was getting to the point where I just had to render it out and play it a few times to know what I'm doing

Yeah I don't know if techno is even a good name for this, but it was the closest decriptor I could think of.
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Time is relative..4 hours is a loooong time to some.

Seriously, though..this is pretty cool for 4 hours mixing/jamming, though I personally still think it needs a little more added to the tune itself..but that's just me, I guess.

Looking forward to hearing the end result when you bounce this down for the last time..so remember to come back and post it here in your first post above, so folks can compare the two mixes.

Best of luck with it.

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Old 26-03-2018, 04:04 PM   #5
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

New version up now.. it's under the same link.
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Old 26-03-2018, 04:47 PM   #6
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

Nice job..really got into that this time round. Not really clear on what you did, but it certainly sounds better to my ears. Going to rip this, if that's OK..if not, no worries..just let me know either way.

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Old 26-03-2018, 05:08 PM   #7
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

Awesome, thanks! Wouldn't you rather have a better quality? I'm not allowing downloads because I intend to release these on my label at some point (starting that up now), but I don't mind giving out files to people that like it. I'm not exactly swamped in listeners yet

There's a new synth in there, some more automation. But mostly I did some cleaning up with EQ and compression, nothing too fancy. And I took some bars out in the middle that were just repetitions.
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Awesome, thanks! Wouldn't you rather have a better quality? I'm not allowing downloads because I intend to release these on my label at some point (starting that up now), but I don't mind giving out files to people that like it. I'm not exactly swamped in listeners yet

There's a new synth in there, some more automation. But mostly I did some cleaning up with EQ and compression, nothing too fancy. And I took some bars out in the middle that were just repetitions.
Yeah..would love a copy..PM a dl link if you like and know it will be played.

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Old 27-06-2018, 11:42 AM   #9
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

Just when I thought I was out..


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haven't forgotten about your file. I'm getting a proper master done soon. Let me know if you prefer the old or the new version.
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

I think I like this second version a little more..it's more polished in general and seems to flow better I think. Nice work.

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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

New version;


hmm... shuffled compoud-timey-slow-techno.


I'd like more treble in the distortion of the kick, it's my favourite element by far, and I feel it's being mistreated as a background element.

Musically it's like... it's almost brilliant but it isn't. I'd like the breaks to be shorter, or weirder.


On second thoughts, I realize this it's too close to something I might make for me to be constructive. If you made 100 tracks like this I would find a lot of them mediocre, some of them good, and some of them the greatest things I've ever heard in my life.

The section @ 4:41 is superior to the rest of the track IMO. It's played with a type of "broken funk" that makes this kind of techno a pure joy to listen too.

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Old 10-07-2018, 04:49 AM   #12
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Re: [Techno] LWJ - Three Kit

mix is pretty spot on. It took me while at the beginning to get into it but after the melodic middle I enjoyed the end.

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