[Garage/House] Olsein - Lullaby Stranger (willianns remix)
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Old 08-06-2014, 01:10 AM   #1
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[Garage/House] Olsein - Lullaby Stranger (willianns remix)

This is my third tune, and I'm quite happy with the progress I've made in the last few months. I use ableton live 9 intro, DT770 pro's, and some cheap plugins for eq (which has expired), multiband compression, and a few other basic effects. Critiques and comments are what I'm here for, so don't be afraid of being harsh. I'm a beginner and I want to learn as much as I can.
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Old 08-06-2014, 06:02 PM   #2
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Re: [Garage/House] Olsein - Lullaby Stranger (willianns remix)

Track is great, plenty of variation, compliments the vocals.

The one bit of advice I can give is to sweep every track for nasty frequencies and bring them down a bit. Hi-pass everything that isn't bass. Even hi hat samples can have some nasty low-end hidden away sometimes

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Old 08-06-2014, 07:38 PM   #3
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Re: [Garage/House] Olsein - Lullaby Stranger (willianns remix)

Really nice track, especially if you're new to all this.

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Re: [Garage/House] Olsein - Lullaby Stranger (willianns remix)

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Track is great, plenty of variation, compliments the vocals.

The one bit of advice I can give is to sweep every track for nasty frequencies and bring them down a bit. Hi-pass everything that isn't bass. Even hi hat samples can have some nasty low-end hidden away sometimes
Ahh I see what your saying, thanks. I would go back and clean up all the eq's but my fab filter eq trial ended a few days ago, so the effect is disabled, so the project file doesn't make any more sound. I will try to do that on my next projects.
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Really nice track, especially if you're new to all this.
Thanks man.

To other viewers, more feedback, critiques or general comments would be awesome!
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Re: [Garage/House] Olsein - Lullaby Stranger (willianns remix)

I am on laptop speakers so I cant give you any technical tips, but it is a good song and there is a lot that compliments the vocals. I fig this spacey feeling, but something sounds like a bit off to me. Maybe like the key or something with some of those chords when they are being side chained in.

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Re: [Garage/House] Olsein - Lullaby Stranger (willianns remix)

Really nice for starting out I mean really. The saw pad seems out of tune or drifting too much maybe.

I have a couple tracks I can't go back to because of Fabfilter demos too.

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Ahh I see what your saying, thanks. I would go back and clean up all the eq's but my fab filter eq trial ended a few days ago, so the effect is disabled, so the project file doesn't make any more sound. I will try to do that on my next projects.
Ah, that's a shame. When rack extensions first came out for Reason, I thought I was being smart by bouncing every track that used a trial version of a plugin, but one project file would be several hundred MB

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