I REALLY liked this....BUT
..reverb..man, it's hard to hear som of the things going on in this mix..a little too much reverb there in general, I think. The end result is it sounds like everything is fighting for some space to be heard. It kinda sounds like you compressed it up a bit, but the wav form shows you didn't do that much, if you can go by a SC wav form.
Still, I loved it all the same..great happy feel off it for the summer. I really hope you try your hand at this again and mess about it with a little more..would love to hear the edited version.