hey man thanks. No worries I can take criticism, especially when its not gratuitous
they must have taken the original down since they will release it. But you can find it on Juno:
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I was hooked in doing the remix by that mellowy synth sound, and I just went along the way the track took me. The only intention was to make a more laid back dub mix, which is also kind of energetic.
Agreed, it's quite fresh sounding and not too deep.
I guess you're also right about structure. I tend to do that too often. The original version of this was like 13 min.. I think I'm just sloppy, mostly I end up with a huge track and then in the end I have cut it down to distill a nice structure
. I try to build my tracks in a way that you get into a certain flow and then adding elements to that. But that's at the cost of variation since the track structure is basically an increasing line. So I can see why it can come off as boring.. Guess the track could benefit from some more effects and automation to the elements as well. Might blow up my laptop though