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Old 24-05-2014, 05:35 AM   #1
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Let me know what you think. I feel like it's missing something but I can't put my finger on it. Feedback welcome...honesty preferred, brutality accepted.


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Old 24-05-2014, 06:03 AM   #2
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Re: [House] Made in the USA

The synths are fucking great, don't touch those. It's all in the drums, imo (the hits are fine, but I'm hearing some kind of conflict in the kick and snare department on the main parts. The breaks sound fucking fantastic). It might even just be the kick (or kick layers) you're using, since everything else seems to compliment the synth backdrop very nicely. The fadeout was really quick, but I'm guessing this is a WIP or something similar.

There might be quite a bit of either upward or downward compression on the master (I could be wrong) but I think it might sound better without such a high amount / threshold on it. Just a thought, but I really dug the song so far.
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Old 25-05-2014, 02:14 AM   #3
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Re: [House] Made in the USA

Thanks for the insightful feedback and compliments. The ending... I don't know what I was thinking there. Good catch.

Do you think there is not enough attack on the kick? Does it conflict with the bassline?

Also, what about the voice? I hardly ever record my own voice. I usually bring in a professional but I just wanted to lay something down to hear how it sounds. Do I need to bring in someone with a deeper and more raspy voice? It's always difficult to be objective when it's your own voice, I think.
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Old 25-05-2014, 07:47 PM   #4
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Re: [House] Made in the USA

When i was listening I was adding a highhat sound on the and 4+ and sometimes on the 2+, so maybe that would be something to look into for adding some more rhythm in the drums. the synths are aren't my style, but they're good everywhere except for the for the first breakdown. I feel like it gets a little messy with all the pitch bends but otherwise its cool.
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Old 26-05-2014, 03:44 AM   #5
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Re: [House] Made in the USA

Thanks for the feedback MVViliams. Yeah I get pitch bend crazy sometimes. I can see how a more active high hat pattern could add to it.
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Old 28-05-2014, 05:30 AM   #6
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This is pretty bad ass. It is really hot in the mix. The synths are really good and the breaks are slamming
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Old 29-05-2014, 11:13 AM   #7
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Re: [House] Made in the USA

Good track. Enjoyed listening to this. Bassdrum needs a little love, maybe tune it down, not sure. It comes across as a bit of a damp slap with its current sound. The rest is great.

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Re: [House] Made in the USA

I'm not sure if you're using a multiband, but it sounds like you are and the mid band is over compressed a little.

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Old 29-05-2014, 06:35 PM   #9
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Heavy synth, the distortion sounds ace. Nice automation too, the snare sounds filthy. The overall mix sounds a bit muddy though, maybe cut 200Hz and increase the mids 500-600Hz
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Old 30-05-2014, 02:22 PM   #10
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Those vocals could be mixed in better, also the kick is a bit loud check your levels!
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Old 31-05-2014, 03:34 AM   #11
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Re: [House] Made in the USA

Thanks for the great feedback all.

Nosferatune: Glad you liked it.

Stercogburn: I've always liked your tracks so coming from you, it means a lot. Yeah, I'll need to check that kick.

TheWizar: Nice ears man! I was using MB. I'll take a look at the mids

Genki B: I will definitely check out those freqs. Nice feedback.

Caius: Yeah, I'll have to work on the vocals. I'm not even sure if I want to keep my own voice. I might have to bring someone else in for that part.

Thanks for the informative and helpful comments.
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Old 31-05-2014, 10:02 PM   #12
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Re: [House] Made in the USA

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Thanks for the great feedback all.

Nosferatune: Glad you liked it.

Stercogburn: I've always liked your tracks so coming from you, it means a lot. Yeah, I'll need to check that kick.

TheWizar: Nice ears man! I was using MB. I'll take a look at the mids

Genki B: I will definitely check out those freqs. Nice feedback.

Caius: Yeah, I'll have to work on the vocals. I'm not even sure if I want to keep my own voice. I might have to bring someone else in for that part.

Thanks for the informative and helpful comments.
Mobilio you're very welcome, keep up the good work!
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Old 01-06-2014, 10:15 AM   #13
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Really great!
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Old 06-06-2014, 09:57 PM   #14
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Really great!
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