It's rougher than it was, and if anything's not quite right or if there's too much bass it's because my mix environment is kinda bad and I didn't try it in the car yet
instantly i can tell it's way over-compressed. like squashed to shit. so whilst the "loudness" is there, there's just no dynamic to the track so any snappyness or movement is totally missing. So my mixing tip for this one would be strip back the processing, and try regain some dynamics first and foremost
My critique: You absolutely destroyed it, sorry : ) If anyone can give me a "nice" sounding version, I'll pay them 20 bucks.
i'm halfway through doing this one, i got the urge after doing numericals, i find the distorted vocal a bit of a twat in the mix if i'm honest. the distortion in the recording is a bit too dominant for my liking. but onwards!