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Notable offender: (three threads in a row, fucking really? lol)

[Hip-Hop] The Artisanal Juice Shop - Beets In The Burbs

this is not how we do things

[Hip-Hop] The Artisanal Juice Shop - Ah! Giant Claw!

Similar to what I had to say on your last posts… really jarring sample jumps and beats. The beat is cool, and i can’t tell if it’s sidechaining or what… but… It doesn’t feel really tied together smoothly. It feels like a long 50s scifi sample with some really abstract breakbeats put into place. If that’s the experimental vibe you were going for, it works… but it doesn’t flow very well at all if I’m totally honest.

[Hip-Hop] The Artisanal Juice Shop - Beyond The Time Barrier

Cool stuff man. Seems very choppy though… with some blatant audio cuts in the 2nd track… it kind of leaves some jarring transitions in place. This isn’t the listening booth and for full releases, so I assume these are completely done, so I’m not here to give feedback - but, the way you’ve stitched the samples are really jarring. that’s about all I can say. the percussion comes in off time, it feels.