My feedback will be very opinion based so please keep that in mind as it very much is personal taste
I like the melodic main sound you use, I find it very happy, uplifting and dreamy. I like the rest of the elements but I feel that they don't belong together. The drums are quite dry and lacking character. I would use a punchier Kick with some more mid content. Same for the snare, it is so dry. So, I basically feel that the melody is super alive while the other elements are being lazy taking a nap ehehehe.
An easy thing that would instantly improve the drums and glue them together is parallel compression.
I would make it less repetitive on the arrangement and use effects and automation. The melody makes me want
to jump like a kid on a playground but the drums are not helping me to eheheh
Looking forward to listen to more tracks from you. Cheers!