Dude you left your lawn mower on....and I think you ran over a transformer...
Love it. You're playing to a certain group of ears. I would want to listen to this like 3% of the time. Most of the time it would be conservative repellent.
I really feel unable to give constructive feedback on this track. It's like a chaotic abstract painting.
Do you feel as though you're conveying the message you'd like? Is this the feel you're going for / is there anything else you desire for this?