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Old 30-08-2017, 03:42 PM   #1
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[Dubstep] - Entox and DJ Rossiroots - Moshino

Hey all.

This is a new work in progress i have been working on with my good friend DJ Rossiroots.

This is still to be bounced back and forth a few times yet so might change over the next month.

Feedback would be great...



Keep on making those tunes...

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Old 31-08-2017, 11:47 PM   #2
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Re: [Dubstep] - Entox and DJ Rossiroots - Moshino

The background sounds and samples are really nice

But overall the track seems still pretty boring to me, i started skipping around after half of it just to check if there will be something happening.

It's basically just 1 musical idea stretched out for an eternity ..
And that idea is nice and cool for maybe 32 bars at a time but no longer.
It's not "going anywhere".

So yeah, I'd shorten the track and add completely new stuff, like a Hook/ drop especially, then you can alternate between parts.

Looking forward to the finished track though
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Old 03-09-2017, 10:49 PM   #3
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I'd say if this song was like 3 minutes then it would be pretty damn good, but it is really long and pretty repetitive. Also, the voice sample added could be fully removed or replaced and I would be happy. If it was only done like once then it would be fine but I found myself getting annoyed by it. You have a really good idea though. The background beat is super solid. All in all, take out that vox and shorten this like in half imo. Good stuff though, it has a lot of potential
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Old 07-09-2017, 08:54 AM   #4
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Re: [Dubstep] - Entox and DJ Rossiroots - Moshino

Thanks for the listens all.

I was actually thinking about cutting it down to just under 4 mins, so i might look into that idea.

I am meeting with my collaborator 'DJ Rossiroots' on monday so we shall have a play around and re-upload...

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Re: [Dubstep] - Entox and DJ Rossiroots - Moshino

Pretty much agree with above. It sounds good but I was forced to stop listening for a minute or so because someone insisted on talking at me. When I put earbuds on again it was like I hadn't missed anything and just carried on until the end.

Good start though, the foundation of a very good track is there.

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Old 08-09-2017, 01:46 PM   #6
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Re: [Dubstep] - Entox and DJ Rossiroots - Moshino

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Pretty much agree with above. It sounds good but I was forced to stop listening for a minute or so because someone insisted on talking at me. When I put earbuds on again it was like I hadn't missed anything and just carried on until the end.

Good start though, the foundation of a very good track is there.
I've chopped it down to just under 4 mins now.

We are still also working on adding some extra melody and/or FX...

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