Sorry..I just couldn't get into this at all. That's not saying it's bad..but just this is not my kind of music. I can't be objective about this kind of "free form" IDM at all, as it goes totally against every musical fiber in my mind and body.
Basically, it's just me..so my apologies for not being able to offer you anything remotely helpful in the area of feedback.
That said, I still wanted to let you know somebody did actually give it a listen on here and wish you all the best with the release..hope it goes well for ya..and don't forget to post about it over in the "[Only registered and activated users can see links. Click here to register]
" section of the forum, when it does go live.