Well, that got my feet tapping.
A couple of things about it I personally
think need looking at, which are..
a) This is basically a track in 2 parts. The first part (the first 4 minutes) is just too long..you could cut 3 minutes out of that an not loose anything and still make the track better for it.
b) The vocals in the first half need looking at. I know the voice is saying a web address, but I just can't make it out, as the audio's not too clear..sounds like a DJ on some local pirate radio station.
c) The vocals in the second half tend to repeat a little too much..you might want to think about using them a little less.
d) The various elements in the background need to come up a little, as they're lost in the mix a bit as things currently stand.
e) As much as I love that bass and drum riff, it needs to be broken up a little more..there's no real break to speak of until around the 4 minute mark, which is too long to be honest. Like I said in the last point...turn those elements in the background up a little more and look at the spacing of the same.
OK..all that said, I still love this track..there's a certain kind of raw, unpretentious energy to it that I love. I really hope you take on board what I've suggested here and apply the same to this track..would love to hear it if and when you do.
Thanks for sharing.