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Old 11-07-2017, 06:52 AM   #1
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[synth wave progressive ] envelope3 -remember star

I've been working on finishing this for a while. I think I've got the arrangement down now. Definitely some mixing to do. It goes to a lot of different places to say the least.

I'd appreciate thoughts on the arrangement.
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Old 13-07-2017, 09:49 AM   #2
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New version. Totally different thing in the end section. I think I like it more.

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Old 13-07-2017, 02:42 PM   #3
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Re: [synth wave progressive ] envelope3 -remember star

I listened to the 2nd one, its really nice man. I like the forwards and backwards looped (?) guitar in there. Sort of our of character for the genre in a good way. At 3 min things get really tasty, perhaps add a sub osc layer in that droning bass to move a little more air, I feel like that transition could be more dramatic.

Portamento lead is doing its job, to my ears it could use a bit more top end to be more present, could just be as simple as opening up that LPF a touch.

Great work here. None of my comments are anything but opinions BTW, it sounds great as is.

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Old 14-07-2017, 11:49 AM   #4
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Re: [synth wave progressive ] envelope3 -remember star

I'm with Chase on this..second version is much better imho..the only thing I would add is it could perhaps be a little louder volume-wise, but that's not really an issue, as we all have a volume knob, don't we!

Nice work..really enjoyed it.

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Old 17-07-2017, 06:43 AM   #5
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Old 17-07-2017, 07:11 AM   #6
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Re: [synth wave progressive ] envelope3 -remember star

Awesome track dude! I liked the 3rd revision most.

The intro stuck out to me as sounding very dark compared to the remaining brighter parts. Dunno if this was intended, or if it's just me. Either way, I like it. Overall, I wouldn't change anything about your track. I do however think it would be neat to have elements from the beginning of the track -- like the hats for example -- return towards the end.

Anyway, solid work man. 5/5 Keep it up.
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Old 17-07-2017, 09:32 AM   #7
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Interesting track. Like that electric guitar vibe that it has
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Re: [synth wave progressive ] envelope3 -remember star

I like the sounds and ideas a ton, i just find it a little too long. I thing it could definitely afford to be edited down a bit to a more streamlined version.

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