[Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18
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Old 28-06-2017, 02:14 PM   #1
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[Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18

A track I made about two years ago, but sort of brushed up a little recently. It is still unfinished. It is perhaps best to use headphones to get the best experience with the bass. Tell me what you think if you feel inclined to

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Old 28-06-2017, 02:31 PM   #2
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Re: [Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18

The intro drags a little bit. The overall track sounds good. Around 30 seconds when you've got the hi hats going i would have used that section as the intro but minus the bass. So basically it would have been 30 seconds intro of just the full on drums and then the bass line kicks in at 30 second.

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Old 28-06-2017, 03:01 PM   #3
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Re: [Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18

My kid started to dance on 1:30. I guess first minute was boring. I like the tune, needs a little more work to fill some empty parts. thought rhodes had to much sidechain on them.

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Old 28-06-2017, 03:17 PM   #4
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Re: [Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18

Thanks a lot for giving feedback guys

Neyus, that is great advice. I may do two versions. The one with the longer intro little for dj friendliness - not that I will ever release this lol, but just in case - and another edit that starts where it kicks in at 30 seconds without the bass.

Mario D, thanks. Can you elaborate on what you mean specifically when you say the empty parts need filling? Like the build ups to the drops? The 'rhodes' are a pad with a low cut off. They sound terrible when the cut-off is increased/opened up. Might add in some other strings, that can add to the progression of the song, rather than sticking with the pad that I can't really do much with. Thanks again for your advice

I am happy you guys like the ideas/sounds though, as I am in love with it lol.

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Re: [Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18

Not much variation in the intro, and it kind of makes me want to fast forward. With that said, I like the rythm, and the elements are mixed well together. The vocals are also pleasant to listen to
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Re: [Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18

It's got a good vibe.
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Re: [Deep House Vocals] PiperRoX - Edit 18

Yeah..that intro could do with a swell or a whoosh or something to lift it and bring it along a bit. Apart from that I really loved this..it's got a nice mellow house vibe to it and goes well with the hot sunny day we're having here right now.

Only one thing I personally didn't like about it..about 2.09 there's this beep / boop sound that comes to the foreground and sounds out of sync with everything else..even takes away from the vocals a bit and kinda pissed me off a bit because of it.

I think you have it running throughout the track, but it's just around the 2.09 mark that it starts to become a pain. If you could tweak that, then that would be really cool and help things a lot..in my opinion.

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