Originally Posted by cazbowyer
Nice vibes! I especially like all the riffs used - really adds something special to the tune. The guitar is also great.
My initial thoughts are that i think that mighty build up in the music from 0:24-0:31 is almost wasted on what comes after (as a listener, i expect some heavy sounds after that sort of build up [huge drum beat/loud saws and what not]).
Then, at 1:28, i feel in terms of structure, the 'build up section' (0:58-1:26) has is followed by a similar section as 1:28-1:59 is almost the same in ethereal vibes and feels dragged out. - Should drop to chorus earlier.
The kick you use is a bit too loud and 'middly' in EQ (needs more bass).
Overall, i enjoyed the 'tropical house' feel to the tune and i feel thats the right genre to describe it with.
Thanks for the feedback! I decided to keep the kick middly on purpose, meaning that it wouldn't clash with the bass that comes in the drop (after the intro section that ends at 1:26, in which I did not use any bass at all really).
Also, I wanted to create suspance in the part that ends at 0:31, that's why I didn't use any heave beat after that.