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Old 12-10-2017, 10:27 AM   #1
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Hi all!

This is my attempt to get some vibes from I Hate Models and nthng.

Hope you enjoy it!

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Old 13-10-2017, 05:49 AM   #2
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-I had to turn it down 1 notch when the kick bumped in, I think some risers or crashes or something could have softened it up and made the transition better
-To me it seems like a backtrack to a British movie about drug dealers dubbed over
-at 3.50 the hats add some drive to the track but i feel like they could use a creeping synth melody instead and it would be more fitting (it doesnt seem like a driving track; not a bad thing just trying to add consistency to the character)
-when everything drops at 5.20 the hats are nice, I think they should be held back until then (not dropped at 3.50). Nice climax
Last thoughts on last thoughts? nice melancholy dub music!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing! Just my opinion.

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Old 13-10-2017, 03:32 PM   #3
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my thoughts on this are different... it is really good.
the only thing personally i would do to it is [maybe] eq the bass on the kick down.... up until
3:40
after then it bass level seems about right.

love this kind of peaceful techno tune... i would play this
5 / 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY GOOD

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Old 13-10-2017, 03:56 PM   #4
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-I had to turn it down 1 notch when the kick bumped in, I think some risers or crashes or something could have softened it up and made the transition better
-To me it seems like a backtrack to a British movie about drug dealers dubbed over
-at 3.50 the hats add some drive to the track but i feel like they could use a creeping synth melody instead and it would be more fitting (it doesnt seem like a driving track; not a bad thing just trying to add consistency to the character)
-when everything drops at 5.20 the hats are nice, I think they should be held back until then (not dropped at 3.50). Nice climax
Last thoughts on last thoughts? nice melancholy dub music!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing! Just my opinion.
Thank you for the feedback !
I will definitely try to add something to make a nice smooth transition to the kicks. One of my flaws are the smooth transitions to the kicks and overall, trying to improve on that.
I will also try to make a version where they drop at minute 5.

Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it
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Old 13-10-2017, 03:58 PM   #5
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my thoughts on this are different... it is really good.
the only thing personally i would do to it is [maybe] eq the bass on the kick down.... up until
3:40
after then it bass level seems about right.

love this kind of peaceful techno tune... i would play this
5 / 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY GOOD
Hi!

I will look into it and check if it would sound better

I'm really glad you like it, thanks for your feedback
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Old 13-10-2017, 04:05 PM   #6
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it's not just me who likes it!

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Old 13-10-2017, 04:16 PM   #7
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Your neighbours too?
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Old 13-10-2017, 08:36 PM   #8
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Lol people like Surgeon love this kind of stuff mate

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Lol people like Surgeon love this kind of stuff mate
Didn't know who he was, but I'm listening to his live sets and I'm digging it !
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Old 13-10-2017, 11:59 PM   #11
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Also check out British Murder Boys (Surgeon + Regis together)

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-I had to turn it down 1 notch when the kick bumped in, I think some risers or crashes or something could have softened it up and made the transition better
-To me it seems like a backtrack to a British movie about drug dealers dubbed over
-at 3.50 the hats add some drive to the track but i feel like they could use a creeping synth melody instead and it would be more fitting (it doesnt seem like a driving track; not a bad thing just trying to add consistency to the character)
-when everything drops at 5.20 the hats are nice, I think they should be held back until then (not dropped at 3.50). Nice climax
Last thoughts on last thoughts? nice melancholy dub music!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing! Just my opinion.
I think it is not melancholy music.
It's more of a soothing track. I like to work for this.
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Old 14-10-2017, 10:51 AM   #13
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Also check out British Murder Boys (Surgeon + Regis together)
Thanks mate! Definitely will
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Old 14-10-2017, 04:35 PM   #14
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Re: [Techno] PeteVai - Last Thoughts

Loving this track, i'm not sure if you took the advice from above, because I didn't really notice myself wanting much of anything while listening. Just pure enjoyment. The only thing that stuck out for me was the pace. I feel like this kind of peaceful techno would benefit from being slowed down... substantially. Instead of the 140 (bpm) arena, maybe try it out around 120 Please let me know if you try that out, i'd love to hear it myself. Great track

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Old 14-10-2017, 05:38 PM   #15
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Loving this track, i'm not sure if you took the advice from above, because I didn't really notice myself wanting much of anything while listening. Just pure enjoyment. The only thing that stuck out for me was the pace. I feel like this kind of peaceful techno would benefit from being slowed down... substantially. Instead of the 140 (bpm) arena, maybe try it out around 120 Please let me know if you try that out, i'd love to hear it myself. Great track
This version is the 'raw' one, haven't changed anything in this one since I posted it

I can agree that it could possibly be better.
I tend to enjoy this type of sound a bit faster but it's a matter of personal taste
But I will try a more smooth bpm to see if it works and I'll post it here, thanks mate !

Cheers !
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!!!! Behave yourself this track is fkin amazing at 140!!! You bafoon!!
Er maybe a remix at 120 would be quite cool though!


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!!!! Behave yourself this track is fkin amazing at 140!!! You bafoon!!
Er maybe a remix at 120 would be quite cool though!

Haha :p

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I'm not a tech-head but I rather enjoyed this. Adding to Recommended

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