[Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood
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Old 23-09-2017, 03:04 PM   #1
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[Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood

Just more of the same.
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lol Put the name in wrong on the subject line - Go Me!

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Old 29-09-2017, 01:34 PM   #2
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Re: [Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood

Some potentially epic progressions in here which I liked a lot. Vocals need upped a little bit.

EQ in general needs some work. Some parts are clashing a bit and weakening each other. This might also sort some of the problems hearing the vocals.

Despite polish-related crits, I liked this track a lot. Good tune, good length, good work

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Old 30-09-2017, 12:50 PM   #3
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Re: [Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood

Thanks!

I will go back over the EQs - I do notice a couple of times the bass will pull down the levels of the mix as well. I'll try to sort that out.

Happy that you liked it.

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Old 02-10-2017, 02:19 PM   #4
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Re: [Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood

I have to aggree, there is a lot to clean up with EQs especially. Highs a little too loud, kick a tiny bit too quiet for my taste.

Vocals seem too clear for me, more distortion/ pitch shift/ high frequencies could be nice.

From the Songwriting point of view, it's a nice track, maybe a bit too linear and repettetive. You could add a "hook" : 4 to the floor beat, super saw leads, some clean/ sung vocals.. Maybe it won't work, just an educated guess

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Re: [Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood

Been doing some reworking on this one.
Still not "there" but getting closer I hope.

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Old 15-10-2017, 04:48 PM   #6
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Re: [Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood

Hey.
I really liked that intro and how it built up to be heavy! But then I just felt like it was a little too repetitive for me. And I find the vocals are still too masked.
It's got lots of potential and that outdo piece was cool, the reverse sound. Maybe make a break out of it?
I can't comment on mixing, I am listening on beats head phones lol.

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Old 15-10-2017, 08:19 PM   #7
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Re: [Industrial] Toothpinch - Fire & Blood

Everyone already sent good feedback. Mixing is key and if it's spot on will for sure remove the sense of being too repetitive (more variation is welcomed anyway).

Seems interesting, so I'm looking forward to the updated version!

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