[Electro House] My first song, maybe you guys can help me think of a title!!
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Old 28-03-2012, 10:10 PM   #1
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[Electro House] My first song, maybe you guys can help me think of a title!!

Hi guys, newbie producer been working at it for 3 short months but it feels like its been a long time! Anyways heres my attempt at my first song, still working on the creative process and mixdown, its still a work in progress and i have lots to learn but I just wanted some feedback/constructive criticism! Thanks!

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Re: [Electro House] My first song, maybe you guys can help me think of a title!!

I would have a closed high hat with the kick and snare at the beginning too and louder in the rest of the song, maybe think about having a clap sample with the snare also. Drop needs a crash, I would suggest crash cymbal samples and sweeps. Main synth gets a bit repetitive, maybe consider having it go higher or lower at some point for variation. Otherwise sounds good I think, well on your way man
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Old 30-03-2012, 02:06 PM   #3
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Re: [Electro House] My first song, maybe you guys can help me think of a title!!

far better then my first attempt at electro house haha
nice....also i agree with the comment below....claps on the snare and a sweep for transitions!
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Old 30-03-2012, 05:32 PM   #4
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Re: [Electro House] My first song, maybe you guys can help me think of a title!!

Hi mate sounds really good as it is your first attempt. As the others have said about the clap. Maybe with kicks on the breakdown adding a low cut eq and bring that down so that kicks are faded in. Keep up the good work mate
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Old 31-03-2012, 07:49 PM   #5
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Re: [Electro House] My first song, maybe you guys can help me think of a title!!

Thanks for the feedback guys, there is something definitely still lacking in the arrangement it needs more hats/off drum kicks/fades the little overlooked elements that make the difference between pro and amateur sounding tracks!

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