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Old 04-06-2017, 03:55 AM   #1
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Old 11-06-2017, 02:29 PM   #2
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The track arrangement is a little bit off like in a middle of the track before some drop the track is like on an outro part, and I thought is the end.And the track is kinda lifeless if you have only a synth, a baseline going on with a drum loop.Make it fuller, listen to other musical producers and compare you're track, you'll see some differences.
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have to agree with the person above me, i feel the middle part of the track is unnecessary and kinda boring, if you cut that part out and attach the 3rd breakdown, it would sound more meaningful. if your going to have a minimal amount of instruments, you should be more creative with the drums

i think it overall sounds good, but I think you should work on the baseline a bit more, it tries to stand out too much to the point of obnoxious. Maybe simplify it a bit more, and make it quieter because whenever i hear the baseline it overwhelms everything else

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