[dont know/ weird industrial with shit guitars] VDB- Possibly Mad and Pretty Bad
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Old 30-06-2017, 12:55 PM   #1
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[dont know/ weird industrial] VDB- Possibly Mad

I haven't been finishing much at all lately.
for many reasons, one being i am mostly screwing around with my hardware and playing guitar.
so i quickly revisited this track
let me know any thoughts
cheers


Edit: I deleted the second track, cuz it was terrible, even for me, but would still like some feedback on the one.

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Re: [dont know/ weird industrial with shit guitars] VDB- Possibly Mad and Pretty Bad

I know the feeling. Haven't finished anything recently, either.

You got some nice syncopation here, but something is missing that would tie the track together. It's almost as though the track progresses without a clear purpose or at least something tying it together.

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Re: [dont know/ weird industrial with shit guitars] VDB- Possibly Mad and Pretty Bad

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I know the feeling. Haven't finished anything recently, either.

You got some nice syncopation here, but something is missing that would tie the track together. It's almost as though the track progresses without a clear purpose or at least something tying it together.
Yeah, thank s for the feedback.
And that's kinda classic me, my tracks always end up sounding aimless a little.
I am thinking of adding industrial guitar chugs on top maybe that would tie things together a bit more.

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