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Old 22-04-2018, 11:37 PM   #1
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[edm]xvf-it could be worse greg

kinda randomly expanded upon an idea, not too sure about the quality of it but anyways feel free to rip it apart

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Old 24-04-2018, 08:52 PM   #2
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Re: [edm]xvf-it could be worse greg

Just a bit too much lo fi for me. Drums seemed quiet. Lots of travelling notes landing squarely on the quarter beat, which is for me always a turn-off. I liked the reverby coda.

1:47 - 2:27 was my favourite section, I liked the simple tune playing though it would benefit from some cleanup.

There's good ideas here but also needs some weeding.

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Old 24-04-2018, 11:32 PM   #3
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Re: [edm]xvf-it could be worse greg

I like the ambient part that starts at 107 and then new section starting at 137 ...reminds me a bit of a clark riff. Def too lo fi for me as well, but could be pretty cool cleaned up if you were into that

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Old 04-05-2018, 05:24 AM   #4
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Re: [edm]xvf-it could be worse greg

This is my first post/comment EVER. So, excuse me if the formatting is wrong.

As for your song I find that the very beginning (0:00 - 0:07) sounds a bit too "videogamey," if that makes sense. I find it sounding kind of cheesey, and simple. From 0:32 and onwards the song improves TEN-FOLD. I like the tension you began building as well as the little bongo hits. From 1:35 and onwards I'm not a very big fan of the lead synth (the "screaming" one that takes up most of the mix.) I feel it doesn't match aesthetically with the rest of the song. As for the mixing it sounds pretty good, except for the sine synth (I think that's what it is) is mixed a bit too quiet. I also think this could use a groovy bass line. I can't tell if there is one, but if there is it's mixed too quiet.

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Old 04-05-2018, 09:41 AM   #5
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Re: [edm]xvf-it could be worse greg

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This is my first post/comment EVER. So, excuse me if the formatting is wrong.

As for your song I find that the very beginning (0:00 - 0:07) sounds a bit too "videogamey," if that makes sense. I find it sounding kind of cheesey, and simple. From 0:32 and onwards the song improves TEN-FOLD. I like the tension you began building as well as the little bongo hits. From 1:35 and onwards I'm not a very big fan of the lead synth (the "screaming" one that takes up most of the mix.) I feel it doesn't match aesthetically with the rest of the song. As for the mixing it sounds pretty good, except for the sine synth (I think that's what it is) is mixed a bit too quiet. I also think this could use a groovy bass line. I can't tell if there is one, but if there is it's mixed too quiet.

Thanks for sharing!
thank you for in depth critique

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