This is my first post/comment EVER. So, excuse me if the formatting is wrong.
As for your song I find that the very beginning (0:00 - 0:07) sounds a bit too "videogamey," if that makes sense. I find it sounding kind of cheesey, and simple. From 0:32 and onwards the song improves TEN-FOLD. I like the tension you began building as well as the little bongo hits. From 1:35 and onwards I'm not a very big fan of the lead synth (the "screaming" one that takes up most of the mix.) I feel it doesn't match aesthetically with the rest of the song. As for the mixing it sounds pretty good, except for the sine synth (I think that's what it is) is mixed a bit too quiet. I also think this could use a groovy bass line. I can't tell if there is one, but if there is it's mixed too quiet.
Thanks for sharing!