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Old 20-01-2012, 04:07 PM   #1
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(IDK) Mellow Planet

This work is not so experimental as my other tracks here, but anyway want to share it coz I like it!

Have fun!



It has some tweaks, like 7/8 time signature, and the structure (it's kinda non convectional but I was following some inner guide to make the whole tune flowing smoothly). Let me know if these features feel good.

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Old 20-01-2012, 08:28 PM   #2
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Re: (IDK) Mellow Planet

I honestly really like how the intro starts out, some very nice glitches and poppy snare hits with that moogish bass
Also love how you have subtle variation and it isn't a drag / boring as hell.
Also love how you constructed the build, subtle and not obvious really, also a nice lead sound, something i'd go for
Love the melody, love the delay, but yeah
I didn't really want it to end, like, it shouldn't have ended...it was kinda an abrupt ending..

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Old 20-01-2012, 09:17 PM   #3
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Re: (IDK) Mellow Planet

That's really nice feedback, dude -- thank you.

I'm so sorry that I cut it so quickly -- that was part of the plan, being unpredictable is so nice, mwuahaha

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Old 21-01-2012, 10:29 AM   #4
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Re: (IDK) Mellow Planet

Not a big fan of the moogish, analog-sounding bass. I think some things drown "in a sea of reverb". I like how there are details that are there, but yet very subtle.

Its a bit repetitive, musically speaking. The melody at 1:24 caught my attention due to its atonal character. I think you can make more of that 7/8. Try 3 2 2, 2 3 2, 3 3 1, 1 2 4, for example. It may help you make the groove less predictable.
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Old 21-01-2012, 10:52 AM   #5
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Re: (IDK) Mellow Planet

Thanks mate!


It's really good to have fresh opinion. Sometimes I need to stop kicking the dead horse.

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