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Old 05-10-2017, 07:16 PM   #1
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[House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

So currently working on this track and wondering if anybody can give me some tips on where to go next
any advice is much appreciated.

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Re: [House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

It's pretty simple. Nothing special. I know you can do better!
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Re: [House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

Hey Haydyn!

Commenting as I listen...
Right away I think the main synth could use some more high end.
The intro isn't bad, but the drop could use a little more variety and I feel like the synth needs less reverb and needs to be more up front.

Keep at it though!!

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Re: [House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

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Hey Haydyn!

Commenting as I listen...
Right away I think the main synth could use some more high end.
The intro isn't bad, but the drop could use a little more variety and I feel like the synth needs less reverb and needs to be more up front.

Keep at it though!!
Thanks man, that's the advice I needed I'll start looking into those areas.

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Old 08-10-2017, 08:29 PM   #5
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Re: [House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

Hello Haydyn !

I like the idea but it looks like it needs a bit more work, in my opinion.
I would probably remove some of the high end of the Kick.
That melody that seems like some kind of vocal could also be used when you have all the elements of the track, would help blend in everything.
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Re: [House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

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Hello Haydyn !

I like the idea but it looks like it needs a bit more work, in my opinion.
I would probably remove some of the high end of the Kick.
That melody that seems like some kind of vocal could also be used when you have all the elements of the track, would help blend in everything.
Hi Pete, Thank you for the feedback I'll get to working on what you guys have mentioned. A vocal is always welcome, just don't know if I really be able to find any samples suited to this & would have to hire someone or do it myself (not the best option lol), thanks again.

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Re: [House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

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Hi Pete, Thank you for the feedback I'll get to working on what you guys have mentioned. A vocal is always welcome, just don't know if I really be able to find any samples suited to this & would have to hire someone or do it myself (not the best option lol), thanks again.

Tim
Hey man!

I probably didn't explain myself well.
What I meant was that you have a melody that sounds a bit like some chopped vocals (appears at around 0:30) that could be used when you have the rest of the elements playing ( kick, drums, etc ).

And fortunately nowadays there are many voice-altering plugins that could turn any crappy voice into an angelical whistle, so you shouldn't worry about recording your own voice because it would be good :p
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Re: [House] Haydyn - Hero [W.I.P]

I know what you mean now, thanks for the advice i'lol start chopping some vocals up and play about with some stuff see what happens.

Hit me up with some links for this software if you can

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