[Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)
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Old 12-09-2017, 10:47 PM   #1
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[Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

So I'm currently entered into this competition and I'm really hoping that this is big break and win or at least come runner up!
Please let me know everything you dislike about this track, even down to the tiny details! This has to be as perfect as it can be by the deadline.

Im still working on making the mastering better but my local studio has been booked out for week, so I can't get a decent master until then!


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Old 14-09-2017, 12:55 PM   #2
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

Finally got round to mastering it!

Let me know what you think!



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Old 14-09-2017, 04:05 PM   #3
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

Checked original version after listening your remix. Quite good work. I like that you made light changes of sound.
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Old 14-09-2017, 05:51 PM   #4
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

Hey I think this is a pretty nice remix, I am not really familiar with the genre but it sounds pretty good. I am not sure if you are going to make any further changes, but one thing I noticed in the original is that they have a very present and prominent snare that punches through their mix beginning somewhere in their intro. Also, they actually have a moderately heavy beat coming in during their second break down section which adds movement and energy to their song before the beat truly kicks in later.

I think at least, the snare in your mix needs to hit a little bit harder. It is panned a little to the right (?) which is a good thing. I would maybe try layering it with a comparable sound and panning that over to the left a little. Nothing too aggressive. But something to add weight to the snare. Also I would try introducing a heavier beat somewhere in your second break down like they did in the original track. It would not be as heavy as your main beat but heavier than what you have now. Anyways good luck to you!
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Old 01-10-2017, 06:52 PM   #5
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

I agree with brook that the snare doesn't pop through enough!

Also for me the vocals need to be in front of the track more. the guitar seems to become the focal point of the song in your remix. imo

As another suggestion for the snare: Maybe do a heavy attack with a transient shaper, and possibly play around with having a dedicated bus that has a slight delay on it. Have the snare sent to it, and have it come in here and there through the song.

Solid remix, thanks for sharing!
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

I like that the vocals are NOT too much in front. I find vocal music to be extremely annoying unless done perfectly. The mastered version is a lot better.

Interesting tune structure.

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Old 02-10-2017, 07:42 PM   #7
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

Breathings Not Easy is sooo damn good. When I listen to it I imagine some very romantic movie scene. You gonna win the competition, I'm sure!

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