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Old 12-11-2012, 01:54 AM   #1
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[ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP



Looking for feedback on flow and possible spots where you think there needs to be "something" in the intro/build/outro. I think the 2nd drop is pretty fullish but I am looking for outside opinions! 1st drop has a bit of work left I think. Suggestions welcome! Almost complete otherwise?

Edit: no melody yet. need to think of one :/

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Old 12-11-2012, 08:05 PM   #2
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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

I think it sounds pretty complete. I probably wouldn't add anything to it. No real complaints from me. Great score!

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Old 12-11-2012, 08:29 PM   #3
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This sounds awesome man! I can definitely appreciate this style of music as it just doesn't come to me when I try to make this stuff.
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Old 12-11-2012, 09:07 PM   #4
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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

haha thanks guys! I'm trying to work on a better melody / hook thing and drawing blanks :/ need it to be more memorable....

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Old 12-11-2012, 09:27 PM   #5
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Sounds great! I feel like that first drop could use more cymbal/high-hat action. Really good work with this track mate!
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Old 13-11-2012, 03:58 AM   #6
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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

I feel like it's a bit too slow. I feel like this would sound better sped up by maybe 5~10 bpm.

I think your melody is fine. It kind of reminds me of a Metroid theme.

You composition is good, the flow is fine, albeit a bit too slow for me. You've got good technicality as well. I wish the kick would hit harder, be a bit deeper.
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Old 13-11-2012, 04:15 AM   #7
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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

Yea, mixing it this week sometime hopefully, fix up the levels. As for the BPM thing I may look into that actually, it's at 124 but not sure which way it'll sound better in. I definitely have to bring out the kick definitely.

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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

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Yea, mixing it this week sometime hopefully, fix up the levels. As for the BPM thing I may look into that actually, it's at 124 but not sure which way it'll sound better in. I definitely have to bring out the kick definitely.

If it's sitting at 124 now, I might suggest you take it all the way up to 132. Give it a minute to sink in though, because it is going to sound a bit funny for the first few seconds.

I like to write my electro stuff at 110~120 range, simply because I feel like it hits harder, however, in a counter argument to that, it simply doesn't move fast enough to keep the momentum it's built. But I draw this from personal experience and no real source. Thank you for considering my thought though, I hope it works out for the better, I'd love to hear it once you've tweaked it.
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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

Thanks! I think I'm going to try to find a better melody? not sure. mixing now though for a little bit.

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Old 17-11-2012, 12:23 PM   #11
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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

Yeah good production etc... It's just not THAT memorable.
Not that it's bad, I really liked it

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Re: [ Electro House / Complextro ] The Dream Eater WIP

Yea trying to find a melody that can sort of mesh well on top of it. :/ But trying to have it be an aggressive lead without eating too much space? Anyone have any tips or hints on how I can maybe achieve that (sound design wise)?

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