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Old 03-15-2017, 10:56 PM   #1
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Re: [Lofi, Beats, Electronic] BellChainedBodies - Weeker

I love that pad, it got my imagination working. I was expecting much more than it delivered though. It's almost like it lacks a second part! I'd say go for some contrast, it would add some depth to the track. Also, another layer of padish elements could pop up midway and make that atmosphere thicker. Build tension, make it move from point a to point b. Or maybe that's just not what you have in mind but I wouldn't know cause you just posted the track without a single word for us to consider. It's on you, bitch

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Old 03-17-2017, 04:46 PM   #3
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Re: [Lofi, Beats, Electronic] BellChainedBodies - Weeker

Pretty much the same thoughts as Lug.

I really like the pad, very BoC while not sounding copy cat-ish. But the whole thing is really static. I think if you could pull of a really vivid mood change in the last 45-30 seconds you might have something. But this feels a bit like half an idea right now.

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well, you guys aren't wrong, I spent about 30 minutes on this, it's just an idea.

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Re: [Lofi, Beats, Electronic] BellChainedBodies - Weeker

Pretty nice for 30 minutes man.

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Old 03-17-2017, 06:57 PM   #6
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Re: [Lofi, Beats, Electronic] BellChainedBodies - Weeker

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Pretty nice for 30 minutes man.
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in the end, I was really hoping to get some commentary on my cover I did, I was a bit insecure about releasing a song with my vocals in it.

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Old 03-19-2017, 03:14 AM   #8
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This sounds fantastic as is! Although I definitely agree that you've got a lot of free room to add stuff/mess around.
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Re: [Lofi, Beats, Electronic] BellChainedBodies - Weeker

The bell or bellpluck is a bit harsh against the the mellow backdrop. But I like the project, perfect as background music imo.

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