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Old 06-03-2017, 01:21 PM   #1
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[EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

Man I've been doing a lot of my projects overnight. Seems to be when I'm most productive anyway. Well here's another one I made by pulling an all nighter.

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Old 07-03-2017, 10:53 AM   #2
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Re: [EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

That's a really cool track you have there, K..kudos, man.

That said, I thought it sounded a bit..well, dead in places..like the sound needed a little "something" to bring the best of it out..or maybe it's just my ears..don't know. Anyway, it's all subjective, so please feel free to ignore me if you disagree..obviously.

I'm not sure what you have on the master bus on this..or what way you mastered it, or even if it was mastered..but you might want to download [Only registered and activated users can see links. Click here to register]
and try adding it to the final mix on the master bus and then playing around with it..it will give you a far better idea of what I mean than my words here alone ever will.

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Old 07-03-2017, 09:16 PM   #3
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Re: [EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

Appreciate the feedback! In terms of sounding dead do you mean more effects and automation? Or is there just not enough stuff going on?

I have an EQ and compressor on the Master.

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Old 08-03-2017, 10:40 AM   #4
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Re: [EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

Maybe "Dead" wasn't the best word to use there..perhaps "muffled" or "in a small space" kind of sound would be a better way of verbalizing it. Don't misunderstand..you have a really good mix here..what I'm talking about I guess is the overall esthetics of the piece..and keep in mind my ears are used to bright and spacey sounds, so that's got something to do with my impressions, too.

Basically, all I'm really saying here is if this were mine, then I'd had a bit more "space" to the overall sound, making a little more wider and brighter in general..hence my suggesting that free plugin, which excels at doing just those things.

That said, please don't feel like this is something you HAVE to do..it's you're work and if this is how you want it to sounds, then that's how it should sound and the rest of us out there should respect and appreciate that fact.

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Old 08-03-2017, 11:34 AM   #5
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Re: [EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

I already have a mastering plugin but I'll definitely give this a try. I'm going to send this to an audio engineer who's going to mix it for me so it probably won't matter all that much.

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Old 08-03-2017, 11:41 AM   #6
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Re: [EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

Piano sounds panned on one side not sure why. Sounds are nice. Thought could use some deeper pads, not these flat sawed kind of. when bass hits it sounds much better.
Track is weird, thought it doesn't have any main theme, but it has many different melodies that are not connected.
Beats are nice and bass really.

Many different melodies. You could make 3 songs out of this one.

Hope nothing offended you. Keep them coming!

edit. when i say different melodies, I mean they are not connected.

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Old 08-03-2017, 11:43 AM   #7
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Re: [EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

The Piano Chords are panned to the left and the melody is panned to the right. I like songs that are constantly moving and non-repetitive with many variations. For instrumentals anyway. So I generally don't keep the same progression going for more than 8 bars.

For vocals, yeah I would definitely split this up into multiple songs.

Check out my track Secret Weapons, it's even worse

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The Piano Chords are panned to the left and the melody is panned to the right. I like songs that are constantly moving and non-repetitive with many variations. For instrumentals anyway. So I generally don't keep the same progression going for more than 8 bars.

For vocals, yeah I would definitely split this up into multiple songs.

Check out my track Secret Weapons, it's even worse
I don't see the need to pan it if there is no frequency issues. Imagine sitting in a caffe where you got 2 speakers, 1 is at the bar, other above your on the other side ^.^

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Old 09-03-2017, 09:22 AM   #10
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As long as it gets pussy.

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Old 11-03-2017, 09:30 AM   #11
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Piano sounds panned on one side not sure why. Sounds are nice. Thought could use some deeper pads, not these flat sawed kind of. when bass hits it sounds much better.
Track is weird, thought it doesn't have any main theme, but it has many different melodies that are not connected.
Beats are nice and bass really.

Many different melodies. You could make 3 songs out of this one.

Hope nothing offended you. Keep them coming!

edit. when i say different melodies, I mean they are not connected.
I uploaded a revised version and tried connecting the different parts.

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Old 23-03-2017, 04:51 AM   #13
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Just got this track professionally mixed. Let me know how the pro version compares to mine.

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Old 24-03-2017, 04:45 AM   #14
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Re: [EDM] Kyrpto - Summer's Eve

Hey dude i really like your tune.

its a little underdeveloped but i still like how you arranged it! try to stay away from preset sequences like that arp that keeps playing a lot. also try to add more more effects like LFO cuts and maybe some cutoff filter automation. but by all means i give your track summer a 6/10. also try to change your style a little bit when you make a new track. i feel like i am hearing the same thing
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Hey dude i really like your tune.

its a little underdeveloped but i still like how you arranged it! try to stay away from preset sequences like that arp that keeps playing a lot. also try to add more more effects like LFO cuts and maybe some cutoff filter automation. but by all means i give your track summer a 6/10. also try to change your style a little bit when you make a new track. i feel like i am hearing the same thing
How would you rate the pro mix as compared to mine? Especially the kick and snare?

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