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Old 02-26-2017, 10:49 PM   #1
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[Aggrotech / Industrial] Toothpinch - Sick Inside

Ok, started this yesterday afternoon and I've worked it to death.

I know my vocals are weak (working on it).

I went for something bolder and further from my safe zone.
Feedback please..


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Re: [Aggrotech / Industrial] Toothpinch: Sick Inside

Tooth, I think the song idea and arrangement you have is great, all the pieces are there. The mix feels really wide and the vox sit in a box in the middle, which conceptually makes sense, but it feels a bit overwrought here. I can hear everything, but perhaps work on balancing the elements a bit more to allow them to have more individual presence at different times. The drums are strong, perhaps too much so at times...if you can finesse a bit to keep them as powerful without being so dominant. Thanks for sharing, and for your comments on my track.
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..perhaps work on balancing the elements a bit more to allow them to have more individual presence at different times. The drums are strong, perhaps too much so at times...if you can finesse a bit to keep them as powerful without being so dominant.
I backed the drums off a bit and that helps I think, brought the vox out a tad too.
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