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Old 02-19-2017, 12:32 PM   #1
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[Electronic] MPPY - Clouds

Hi guys,
Here's another WIP I've put together, any feedback on the mix and progression would be appreciated.



P.S. Does the harp work for you?

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Old 02-19-2017, 07:12 PM   #2
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Re: [Electronic] MPPY - Clouds

Interesting use and mix of synths. I liked the mellow beat and chill vibe. Nice work
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Old 02-20-2017, 07:16 AM   #3
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Re: [Electronic] MPPY - Clouds

I really like this one too. I think the harp works really well in it. It gives it a kind of ethereal and organic feel.

Personally I think the clap could use a tad bit more punch on the attack, whether that be layering it with a short snare that's pitched down a bit, or EQing.

Also I think the break at 1:50 could last a bit longer. You could keep the drums out for another bar or two then bring them back in with the bass. I'm just a sucker for obvious contrast in songs.

Other than that, this is awesome!


Oh an one more thing... I wish it was longer

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Old 03-24-2017, 05:38 AM   #4
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Re: [Electronic] MPPY - Clouds

i couldnt get your song thaat you posted but i listened to your other song on your signature and it sounds really mellow!
you have this type of flow that makes me want to go to the matrix and just dodge all the bullets that fly towards me haha
but i like your style this music could be used on a platform game so try to copyright it and do some syncing with a game or something!
overall it sounds amazing! 8.5/10 keep doing what you're doing sonn!!!

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