[Mizuchi]

I have no idea what this is. Just having some fun, first time I incorporated my singing into a track. Tried to do something a bit different than my usual. Get out of my comfort zone so to speak. Again, it comes with a mini story:

It's one of a machine wondering a planet looking for a way to escape it. For centuries it has been waiting, wandering around waiting for something to get it off of this world uninhabited by any form of intelligence that could understand it and speak with it. It can feel itself slowly falling into the repetitiveness of it's own actions and thoughts, falling into the madness of it's purposelessness. But it isn't unhappy, it exists and that is enough for it's apreciation of existence. And it will wander for ever if that what destiny has in store for it.

Enjoy

[mo0]

Hey, I'm new here but I wanted to say I liked this track. The vocals were great. A bit too much distortion for my tastes but I enjoyed listening.

[PhiJayy]

Dude this sounds really awesome thanks for sharing!
I like everything about it...perhaps a bit less distortion besides that this track is good to go!

[Moppy]

I would enjoy some more timbre contrast in the track. I would recommend getting rid of the distortion on the vocal and lead so they sound softer/more airy to contrast the heavy distortion on your other elements. Nice work

[Mizuchi]

Thanks guys,

and yeah I understand. The reason I put distortion on the voice is because I wanted it to represent the robots inner voice, which I can't imagine sounding soft. Maybe I could try finding another way of emulating/creating a more synthetic style of voice all the while keeping it smooth.

[Moppy]

Originally Posted by Mizuchi

Thanks guys,

and yeah I understand. The reason I put distortion on the voice is because I wanted it to represent the robots inner voice, which I can't imagine sounding soft. Maybe I could try finding another way of emulating/creating a more synthetic style of voice all the while keeping it smooth.

ah yeah I get it, maybe try some auto pan, vocoder and or bit crusher

[farloopers]

Really nice track you got there. I really like the combination of bitcrusher sounds with none, maybe, just a matter of taste, the only thing I see is that the second part of the song isn't as powerful as the first one, it's the feeling I get, but it's just an opinion. Overall it's a good track, well done.

[Creepr]

Hey Mizuchi. I dig it, the vocals are nicely placed in there. I think the distortion is ok but cut some of the hight freqs out maybe...it gets a bit feedbacky in the background to me. Regarding a more robotic sound, I struggle with that as well. I think maybe a vocoder with some fast rotary may be an option, or another layer with some gated effect? Just some ideas. Given the awesome background story I wish there was more of it present in the song. Or maybe run with the story and make more songs on the theme? You know, first contact, attempt at escape, quiet resignation, fading away..you could get a whole project out of the idea. In a single track the whole story seems a bit lost. I have a similar project on the shelf myself, maybe I should dust it off again. Thanks for the inspiration.

[Mario D]

Originally Posted by Mizuchi

I have no idea what this is. Just having some fun, first time I incorporated my singing into a track. Tried to do something a bit different than my usual. Get out of my comfort zone so to speak. Again, it comes with a mini story:

It's one of a machine wondering a planet looking for a way to escape it. For centuries it has been waiting, wandering around waiting for something to get it off of this world uninhabited by any form of intelligence that could understand it and speak with it. It can feel itself slowly falling into the repetitiveness of it's own actions and thoughts, falling into the madness of it's purposelessness. But it isn't unhappy, it exists and that is enough for it's apreciation of existence. And it will wander for ever if that what destiny has in store for it.

Enjoy

It's all great. I think track only misses a better mix, especially those high frequences. It's so easy, just set every instrument to a bit different frequency and everything should fit.
Sounds very dirty above like 6k or so hz

[Toothpinch]

Yeah, I'll chime in and agree to the fuzzy highs - and more vocoder / bitcrusher than distortion.
But very nicely put together.

[Beid]

Like the organ sounds and old vibe to it. I like also u mention u r having "fun" and using your own vocals and stuff. Technically really good and others identified sound issues. Thanks for posting