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Old 28-08-2015, 08:03 PM   #1
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[Experimental Electro] Bomb!




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Old 31-08-2015, 05:04 AM   #2
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Re: [Experimental Electro] Bomb!

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COOL TRACK MAN. WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS I JUST FINISHED.



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Old 31-08-2015, 10:22 AM   #3
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Re: [Experimental Electro] Bomb!

Good stuff. My two cents:

Chords in the first 15 seconds seem a bit random. You build them into a groove later, but maybe try building them into a groove a bit earlier.

The drop at :34 comes a bit suddenly, maybe start phasing in some of your noise elements you currently start at :27 a few measures earlier.

the lead at 1:20 doesn't really grab me. By 1:40 it starts to make better sense. Maybe slowly filter the lead you start at 1:40 in a few measures earlier?

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Old 31-08-2015, 11:01 AM   #4
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Re: [Experimental Electro] Bomb!

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Good stuff. My two cents:

Chords in the first 15 seconds seem a bit random. You build them into a groove later, but maybe try building them into a groove a bit earlier.

The drop at :34 comes a bit suddenly, maybe start phasing in some of your noise elements you currently start at :27 a few measures earlier.

the lead at 1:20 doesn't really grab me. By 1:40 it starts to make better sense. Maybe slowly filter the lead you start at 1:40 in a few measures earlier?

Keep at it
Much thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. My thing has always been do the unexpected, but i see what you mean, haha.

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Old 01-09-2015, 02:24 PM   #5
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Re: [Experimental Electro] Bomb!

maybe add an arpeggio around the 1 minute mark would sound cool
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Old 07-09-2015, 10:28 AM   #6
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maybe add an arpeggio around the 1 minute mark would sound cool
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