Re: [Dance] Beer O'Clock
It certainly is looking like it's shaping up OK..but there are a few things about it I would change personally..but tkae these with a pinch of salt, as the old saying goes.
1) From the end of the intro to when the beat kicks in seems to be a little bit on the long side to me. I might be totally wrong about this, but that's how it sounds to my ears.
2) It might need a little bit of reverb over all and a tweak of the EQ to bring the sound out a bit more..not much..but a little.
3) You might want to think about adding something else into the mix, as it does seem a little "empty" in general, with not enough going on to hold interest.
Having said the above, I've got to say I really liked the melody and sound in general and can't wait to hear what you do with this.
Hope you find all this helpful in some way.