[chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)
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Old 12-10-2016, 03:19 PM   #1
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[chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)



winter LP coming December 1st, 2016

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a song about long periods of constant loss and misfortune.

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Old 12-10-2016, 06:43 PM   #2
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good lo-fi mood. nice autumn music. a lot of tristesse. not much going on, but i think that's the point of this song!! The crackle is a bit too loud for my taste. But that's just my opinion. By the way some nice tracks drifting in ur soundcloud too ;-)
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Old 12-10-2016, 07:28 PM   #3
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good lo-fi mood. nice autumn music. a lot of tristesse. not much going on, but i think that's the point of this song!! The crackle is a bit too loud for my taste. But that's just my opinion. By the way some nice tracks drifting in ur soundcloud too ;-)
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Old 14-10-2016, 06:28 AM   #4
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Re: [chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)

Yeah, nice mood created here. I agree that the dusty record effect needs to come down quite a bit.

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Re: [chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)

I basically agree with other guys: nice tune but "old vinyl" sounds should be a bit more subtle, they are stealing too much attention from the melody.
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Old 16-10-2016, 06:37 PM   #6
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Re: [chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)

I think the vinyl crackle thing is a little played out personally. I like it when it sounds a bit more natural though. Right now it sounds to much like its sitting awkwardly on top of the mix. I'm also confused by the two different versions. The video version really does end too abruptly for me for a stand alone track. In sequence it probably works.

Other than that I'm very much enjoying this track. I love the dusty drum machine sounds. Musically interesting. Nice melancholy vibe. Also, the little break near the end where you think the song ends but doesn't is timed just perfectly. Overall well done. Mix sounds pretty decent as well.

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Old 17-10-2016, 02:32 PM   #7
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Re: [chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)

i do not like crackling sound and over filtered drums... but overall is nice, and in video, use some longer, subtle transitions, because this tune deserv it
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Old 18-10-2016, 01:35 PM   #8
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Re: [chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)

crackling is a bit too prominent, I see what effect you were trying to achieve though. Try putting a low pass on at, and maybe a lil verb to seperate it from the track. Fantastic track other than that, would love to hear a vocal on it personally.
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Old 18-10-2016, 01:47 PM   #9
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Re: [chill,sad] cricketpaper - a walk in the cold (single)

I could totally see some vocal bit, not so much direct vocals, but overheard coffeehouse chat or something, but about a breakup or "winter is coming" or something. The end is really abrupt which really took me out of the mood the piece has lulled me into....if it were me I would just fade it out. my 2c.

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