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Old 02-04-2013, 08:10 AM   #1
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Old 03-04-2013, 06:39 PM   #2
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Re: Requiem for a Soul

Nice beat, could use more variation & automation

High hats seem a little harsh

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Old 03-04-2013, 06:42 PM   #3
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Re: Requiem for a Soul

Nice sound design on the intro. I don't think the loop you've got is interesting enough to be looped for so long. It needs a lot more variation. The shuffly hats sound very dry and sharp. Douse them in a tiny short reverb. Is this intended for a rap? It seems to be calling out for an MC.
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Old 03-04-2013, 07:07 PM   #4
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Re: Requiem for a Soul

It's a groovy beat. I can picture it with some rap on top. But I think that you should either add that rap (record someone or find one) or add some variations. Good luck!

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Re: Requiem for a Soul

Hi NebulaFG,

like the childish vocal. I think your mix will benefit from more stereo panning, i.e on the hats - try to put them 20% L or R.

More reverb on the snare will also fit the track. I like it - the song it`s long so should be good to have some development. The outro is good. Good work, put more work in it and you will be there.

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Re: Requiem for a Soul

Was going to give my comments but then read eveyyone else's and can only agree with whats already been said.

So as useless as a comment this is. I just re-affirm whats the others have said

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Old 04-04-2013, 12:01 PM   #7
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Re: Requiem for a Soul

Yes I do need a rapper. I've got one already. Are you guys saying that the hard hi hats n tambourine are distracting thus shud be lowered? Like more in the the back ground?

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