[AsylumSeaker]

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This is pretty groovy for an interlude. Considering its short length and barren structure (which is by no means a deficit when it comes to noise) I'm almost wondering what kind of critique you're after, but I think you hit the mark on some dirty, awesome rhythmic noise. I would have preferred it to be maybe a little more torn apart and abrasive if that's what you were going for, but I think you have a pretty good start to a track (or again, possibly an interlude) going on here.

Whatever it is, I like it. It's worth listening to multiple times if that means anything significant to you.

[AsylumSeaker]

Cheers for the interesting comment
Not exactly sure what I'm looking for in terms of critique, this was just a brief recording from a jam session I was having.. guess I just post these things to help me gauge what people like and don't like.
If I were doing a track I would definately tear it up a little more for some breakdowns, intro or outro section etc. I used one of these in this and oh man does it smash sound:

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