Re: [House/Dark/Electronic] Boxed In - Two Opal
the elements really need to be eq'd properly. sounds like everything is straight up in the mix, and very muddy. things need to be widened, panned, etc... the kick is really weak, the snare needs to snap a lot more. sounds like some clipping is going on. bassline needs to be tamed. they don't really sit right on top of each other. the ba-da-dum needs to be gated.
put a frequency analyzer like voxengo span on the elements and see how they overlap / fit together, how you can seperate them a bit without just sidechaining.
good ideas though, may sound harsh but i dont comment on things unless i like em