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Old 13-02-2018, 03:13 AM   #1
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I accidentally nuked a whole bunch of samples during a format, so I'm stuck with freeware dramz for the time being. Challenge accepted

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Old 13-02-2018, 10:10 PM   #2
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Re: [Metal] Agent Slimepunk - Obtemperate

Listened to this all the way through as I do enjoy sum good metal!



For using " freeware dramz" this is came out rather well, if I may so!

Was really hoping for a melodic interlude with the guitar part switching to some sort of metallica'ish ballad, but the drive worked too!


Thanks so much for sharing!
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Old 14-02-2018, 01:58 AM   #3
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Re: [Metal] Agent Slimepunk - Obtemperate

Wow, this is jamming stuff here!

Totally loved it, everything sounded proper and right, even if you are using different drums than you intended. Great job on this, kept me going the whole time and brought me back to my metal drumming days!
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Old 14-02-2018, 02:37 AM   #4
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Re: [Metal] Agent Slimepunk - Obtemperate

Nice one,
What are you using in terms of guitars/amps?
It sounds very old-In Flames-ey
Thatís a compliment btw, donít know how anyone still feels about them but I loved me some In Flames. That went way off topic.
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Old 14-02-2018, 04:46 PM   #5
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Re: [Metal] Agent Slimepunk - Obtemperate

Not bad at all.
The intro is a punch in the face , instant headbanging and the song in general is good , but .. as someone said before me , it is missing an interlude , something to switch it up.
I mean .. riffing in drop C ( i believe u are using that one ) is fkin great but using the same key for the entire song makes it boring.
Anyway thats my advice...

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Old 15-02-2018, 06:27 AM   #6
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Re: [Metal] Agent Slimepunk - Obtemperate

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Nice one,
What are you using in terms of guitars/amps?
It sounds very old-In Flames-ey
Thatís a compliment btw, donít know how anyone still feels about them but I loved me some In Flames. That went way off topic.
Not joking at all, but I started this project a year or two ago in order to blatantly rip off Jester Race / Whoracle / Clayman / Colony type tracks on a tight budget and a lot less talent. I had a really unhealthy obsession with them as a teen, so that's awesome that it shows and you picked up on it!

It's all in-the-box. Guitar rig and MT Power Drumkit are all that I used, and everything is going direct. I don't even know what guitar / bass I'm using, just some cheapo Ibanez and a no-name bass

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Not bad at all.
The intro is a punch in the face , instant headbanging and the song in general is good , but .. as someone said before me , it is missing an interlude , something to switch it up.
I mean .. riffing in drop C ( i believe u are using that one ) is fkin great but using the same key for the entire song makes it boring.
Anyway thats my advice...

Peace.
Good ear, it is drop C! I don't really know how to play guitar outside of bullshitting in drop D or C (and I have zero knowledge of theory whatsoever), so I'm unfortunately doomed to this BS forever. I also can't solo, so maybe the small licks will be my stupid signature

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Old 15-02-2018, 10:18 PM   #7
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Re: [Metal] Agent Slimepunk - Obtemperate

I've probably said this to you ten times before but you seem to never listen...

your ideas are underdeveloped. It seems you ignore any criticism too. Don't blame your gear and skills and just listen to me for a bit. You can do great, but only if you put much more time into it. This is your talent but your approach to it is a curse, imo. You can come up with cool ideas really quick, you record them but then leave them as demos forever. Then you nuke your pc and start it all over again... Such a waste here. Why not collecting ideas instead? I've heard bands that are so much worse and you're, like, one guy that has so more potential but you seem to don't care about it that much and keep repeating same mistakes. It's not about production, you obviously got much better but it's about that attitude you're still keeping from early days since we became best internet friends. Sorry if this sounds too harsh, I only wish you the best and you know that.

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Old 15-02-2018, 10:24 PM   #8
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I've probably said this to you ten times before but you seem to never listen...

your ideas are underdeveloped. It seems you ignore any criticism too.
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Old 16-02-2018, 11:47 AM   #9
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I've probably said this to you ten times before but you seem to never listen...

your ideas are underdeveloped. It seems you ignore any criticism too. Don't blame your gear and skills and just listen to me for a bit. You can do great, but only if you put much more time into it. This is your talent but your approach to it is a curse, imo. You can come up with cool ideas really quick, you record them but then leave them as demos forever. Then you nuke your pc and start it all over again... Such a waste here. Why not collecting ideas instead? I've heard bands that are so much worse and you're, like, one guy that has so more potential but you seem to don't care about it that much and keep repeating same mistakes. It's not about production, you obviously got much better but it's about that attitude you're still keeping from early days since we became best internet friends. Sorry if this sounds too harsh, I only wish you the best and you know that.
I think the sad part is that my fullest potential really is just a mediocre, undeveloped demo. I basically have to stop working on a set of songs once I run out of CPU power, and that's usually at the 5-track mark (my PC is basically like one of those shitty tascam tape recorders).

It also seems like the longer I focus on something, the worse it gets. Maybe I'm approaching 100% of it all wrong, or in-the-box metal created by one idiot will never sound like a good band who can routinely perform their songs without forgetting what they wrote and recorded in 5 minutes.

You're right, and there's like 50 layers to my ass backward, retarded approach. I should probably take some time to actually learn guitar for a few years, then songwriting, then maybe theory. There's a reason why this is all a horrible mess

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Old 17-02-2018, 03:30 PM   #10
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Re: [Metal] Agent Slimepunk - Obtemperate

Yes. Metal stuff

For freeware drums this is awesome (snare base sound is top), but I am really missing a singer on it.

Additionally:
- Guitars can be just a bit more polished (cleaning in 4-5 kHz region and more air in high region)
- Cymbal at 1:34 is causing earache ... there is something in the high region which must be fixed
- Kick Drum needs more body (sounds a bit too thin to my ears, Kick is nice)
- all Drums (esp. Snare, Toms) need some more "good" reverb
- I would lower the cymbals just a little bit to give more space to Kick, Snare, Toms

but overall this is really good for a demo and mixing is also always depending on taste.

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