Had to check out the track since..breakbeat
- way the break is cut up is really notable. Maybe make the pieces a little bigger or make a fade if it was done with an volume automation. A little reverb on them? Or this could be just what you want, then ignore my comment
- Like the bass and the modulation it has
- Like the background noise.
- That second break (or probably the pitched version of the first as you said you only used one) is a bit to chaotic rattling for me. It sounds like some old skool rough breakbeat infused house. Which could be cool..but maybe in a bit more measured way. Now it goes on for quite long imho.
An idea is maybe to try out lowering the tempo a bit on the entire track, who know..it could just fit better.
Anyway, nice start and keep on breakin'