Thanks for your input dudes. Sorry this took a bit and I didn't do much, just got busy last week.
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I went ahead and did one revision, mastered it, and released as-is. I think the hats are too loud and the bass may be a touch boomy, but I did the final mixdown and master in one night with my neighbor blaring his music and my brother playing vidoegames the next room over. So I guess I'll take it.
I turned down the kick/snare a bit and put them through an allpass filter to soften them up some, and I did just the tiniest touch of swing, 1/6 of a 32nd note.