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Old 12-08-2017, 10:38 PM   #1
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[Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

Honored IDM musicians!

I have a new track that I could use some feedback on.

If you feel like it, here are some things you may comment on:

How's my track?
What do you think of the mixing and mastering production?
What do you think of the drums sound design?


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Old 14-08-2017, 10:34 PM   #2
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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

Alright I see that no one likes to follow a private link and I have made it public.
Care to comment now?

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Old 15-08-2017, 09:35 AM   #3
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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

It's really good, I appreciated the melodies and the different synths sounds. The track has his own atmosphere and all the sounds are in their right place. The drums fit well and aren't predominant.
Ah, and the final's fantastic, those sine waves (or not?) remind me to Boards of Canada.
I leave technical comments to more expert people, honestly I didn't find any mixing's issue.
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Old 15-08-2017, 10:24 AM   #4
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Really glad to hear it Lorenzo, thanks!

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Old 15-08-2017, 01:19 PM   #5
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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

this is a really nice production, the percussion and synths all sound great, especially that bass which sounds really good.
Its really well mixed as well, the kick sits really well with the bass
good work

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Old 15-08-2017, 06:12 PM   #6
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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

writing as listening to the track....Melodically flows really well! mix is sounding good! but i think it could sound even better. Missing the thud in the kick drum I know stylistically this genre doesn't necessary have pounding kicks but I feel the percussion in general could have a little more crack . Maybe some parallel compression on the individeual mix groups and some fine tuning with EQ and an exciter.Also emphasizing those glitchy hi hats by pushing the hi end a bit really tickle the ear drums. Again I think the mix sounds good, still very clear and the track sounds great!, but with a little work on the percussion and possible some boosts to HI and Sub frequencies on the master you could have a killer track. Also all of this may just be my personal taste so take it with a huge grain of salt

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Old 15-08-2017, 09:04 PM   #7
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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment! Appreciated.

Great to have your detailed feedback strangerflesh. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.
Not sure about the kick thud - that's the sub part of the kick right? Here on both my Adam A7 and AKG K712 I have plenty of sub/low end, right to the limit (no Sub though). I tried adding a bit to the high end and that made it more sparkling. I have held a bit back with the high end lately so maybe I need to bring it back again

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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

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Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment! Appreciated.

Great to have your detailed feedback strangerflesh. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.
Not sure about the kick thud - that's the sub part of the kick right? Here on both my Adam A7 and AKG K712 I have plenty of sub/low end, right to the limit (no Sub though). I tried adding a bit to the high end and that made it more sparkling. I have held a bit back with the high end lately so maybe I need to bring it back again
Ya, I think I miss spoke when I said thud I meant crack...all this mixing lingo I mixup sometimes ;0 the low end is very nice on the kick

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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

I`m not a honored IDM musician I`m just person who like such a music And I suppose that your track is awesome!
I really want to praise your drums sound design. This is an interesting rhythmic pattern came out here. Thank you!
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Old 17-08-2017, 07:12 PM   #10
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Re: [Electronica/IDM] Soarer - A.I. Poetry

Thanks for the awesome feedback Adelina! Glad you like it.
The drum samples are all home made so I'm sometimes in doubt if they sound good enough or need more work.

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