[Industrial/dub] Automageddon - The Garden (wip)
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Old 29-07-2017, 11:47 AM   #1
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[Industrial/dub] Automageddon - The Garden (wip)

Newish track, with new mix, mostly looking for feedback on the mix, but anything goes really.

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Old 31-07-2017, 06:25 AM   #2
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Re: [Industrial/dub] Automageddon - The Garden (wip)

So the base kinda has that intentional overdrive/peaking kinda thing, but I sorta think it stands out a bit too much at certain parts. Maybe around 1:07 area. I wonder if those two percussion hits should be louder.. the two that follow the bass line beb oom......(hit... hit)

Think its on the "and" of beat 4 first, then right on beat 1 seems like its a little low. I'm not sure if its a metallic cowbell sound or woodblock. I think Id like to hear it louder. @ parts like 3:16 that have that kick sound I wouldn't mind hearing that kick a little louder. Maybe louder throughout the whole think not sure.

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Old 31-07-2017, 08:12 AM   #3
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Re: [Industrial/dub] Automageddon - The Garden (wip)

Thanks for the feedback, I'll give it a new listen with your notes in mind once I have some time this week, much appreciated.

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Old 31-07-2017, 09:34 AM   #4
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Re: [Industrial/dub] Automageddon - The Garden (wip)

very nice!!

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Re: [Industrial/dub] Automageddon - The Garden (wip)

Yeah, I like it, but I think you could turn the kick up a bit or maybe side chaîne the bass to duck a bit when the kick comes in. That said I listened on beats headphones so not sure how good that advice is.

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Old 07-08-2017, 10:00 AM   #6
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Re: [Industrial/dub] Automageddon - The Garden (wip)

I like the dirtyness of the track Maybe a kick could be a little stronger though

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