Definitely the most interesting metal I've heard from you (I really like your ambient/soundscape stuff). I like that it's not really genre specific. It feels like you've carved out a space for yourself, and it doesn't necessarily follow other people's rules.
If there was one thing I'd add, it'd be texture. I like what's going on, but it feels a bit like you're jamming over one thing for a few minutes. It needs dynamics and some dirt. The tremeloed guitars early on are a start, but they're really one dimensional. Given the quality of your electronic and ambient work, I'd suggest bringing some of those elements into it, even if they're pushed way to the background. Something to set it apart and add depth to the track.
I also think the drums are mixed entirely too far forward and dry, and it distracts from the rest of the track. They sound really sterile and monotone. Might be personal preference for you. My personal preference isn't to have clicky bass drums all in my shit while I'm trying to listen to cool guitars.
(for some reason the embed sounds limited or something? soundclown is stupid)
Soundcloud converts everything to 128k mp3. It's going to gut your high end. If you uploaded an mp3 at greater than 128k, it's really going to sound like shit as it's getting re-encoded. The best thing you can do is upload a 128k mp3 you mastered yourself.