[Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)
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Old 19-12-2017, 10:11 PM   #1
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[Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

I'm having trouble deciding if I should remove the vocals and keep the track purely instrumental or leave it as is... Would love to know what you guys think.

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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

I think that vocal bit probably helps the the two parts before and after mesh together a bit better, I'd leave it.

I think it would make the track a bit "empty" if cut out if you know what I mean.

Nice track as well brother

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Old 20-12-2017, 05:05 PM   #3
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

IMHO the track is perfect as is. Vocals making the sound more interesting. I agree with Intro/Verse that vocals are linking melody parts together.
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Old 21-12-2017, 08:04 PM   #4
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

+1 for keeping the vocals.

I also think the track is working as it is. Great feeling and sound. As a suggestion I would maybe throw in a couple of oddballs here and there to keep the listener on his toes

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Old 29-12-2017, 10:33 PM   #5
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

Sounds amazing, I think it is good as it is. The mix sounds good on my speakers too. I think the vocals fit well in the track, and as others have said, it keeps up my interest. If you're still unsure, you could try to keep the vocals but move them to the background to act as more of a background effect, with ping pong delays and filters?

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Old 29-12-2017, 10:45 PM   #6
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

Tracks sounds real nice, I say keeps the vocals . Even add more ...like some long one notes and harmonized ooohs and ahhs ...with loads of reverb hahaha , thats personally my fav

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Old 30-12-2017, 08:19 AM   #7
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

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Tracks sounds real nice, I say keeps the vocals . Even add more ...like some long one notes and harmonized ooohs and ahhs ...with loads of reverb hahaha , thats personally my fav

Yes, I think vocals fits well but I agree- more reverb in the middle and in 0.35 I would add some echo to lay with the beat as it sounds a bit like this is cut in this moment.
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

This sounds excellent, love the slow mo vibe and yes I’d keep the vocals too. If you think they don’t work you could experiment more with double tracking, phasing parts and reverb.

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Old 02-01-2018, 02:43 PM   #9
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

Really appreciate all the feedback! I've taken all of it into account and reworked the track. Added more vocals, more reverb here and there, shakers and some live play towards the end. I just uploaded the new version if you guys want to listen. Happy New Year!

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Old 02-01-2018, 04:49 PM   #10
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Re: [Downtempo Techno] Yasmine hamdan - Deny (Fidin Mafishi Remix)

Hi bandic00t

Good job with the new version

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